Chapter V – Derrick Vaughan–Novelist begins as Lawrence departs for war, leaving Derrick in Bath to continue managing the fragile peace between himself and their difficult father, Major Vaughan. The atmosphere at home slightly improves at first—thanks to the medicinal effects of Bath’s waters and the Major’s temporary restraint from alcohol. However, this fragile stability unravels when Derrick’s friend visits unexpectedly and finds him injured, his arm broken under suspicious circumstances. While no clear confession is given, it becomes evident that an argument escalated into something more physical. The Major had relapsed into drinking, and in his intoxicated state, lost all sense of control. The incident, while not publicly acknowledged, reveals the emotional and physical toll Derrick endures. His landlady quietly expresses concern, hinting at the danger of leaving Derrick alone with a man capable of violence. The situation underscores the often invisible burdens placed on those who care for troubled family members.

Despite his injury, Derrick does not allow himself to fall into despair. With his dominant arm immobilized, he teaches himself to write with his left hand, continuing his work on Lynwood’s Heritage with admirable persistence. Writing becomes not only a professional pursuit but a refuge from the chaos surrounding him. His strength lies in his ability to endure and adjust, even when comfort is absent. As he waits for word from publishers, he also hears news of Freda Merrifield—updates that unsettle him emotionally, though he keeps those feelings closely guarded. Freda represents a different life, one filled with warmth and shared understanding that feels painfully distant. Her name resurfaces often, unspoken in letters, hinted at in conversations, but ever-present in Derrick’s mind. This emotional backdrop colors his writing, giving it a depth shaped by unfulfilled affection and quiet sorrow.

Eventually, Lynwood’s Heritage is published, and Derrick’s anticipation turns to anxiety as the first reviews begin to circulate. Some praise the work’s thoughtfulness and realism, while others criticize its structure and tone. The conflicting opinions leave Derrick shaken. The sting of public criticism pierces deeper because of the effort he put into the novel while under personal strain. Though he had not hoped for riches, he had longed for recognition, and the lukewarm commercial response bruises his confidence. The failure is not catastrophic, but it is disheartening—his quiet labor met with indifference, his hopes quietly dimmed. Rather than lash out or retreat, Derrick absorbs the disappointment. He reflects on what it means to create art in a world that does not always reward effort or sincerity.

The chapter captures the essence of perseverance through disappointment. Derrick’s life is defined not by grand triumphs, but by the dignity with which he faces setbacks. His relationship with his father continues to be a source of pain, yet he does not abandon his duty. His heart remains tied to Freda, even if he believes she may never feel the same. His writing becomes both an outlet and a burden—an effort to transform suffering into something meaningful. Even as Lynwood’s Heritage fades from public view, he does not give up. He begins to plan his next work, not out of ambition, but from an inner drive to communicate what he sees and feels. Derrick embodies the quiet strength of those who continue despite being overlooked.

By the chapter’s end, the contrast between Derrick’s external circumstances and his internal resilience is unmistakable. While society may not yet see his worth, the reader begins to understand that his courage lies not in fame or praise, but in integrity. He writes, he cares for a difficult parent, and he faces each day without bitterness. These quiet victories, often unnoticed by others, define his character. In a world preoccupied with success, Derrick Vaughan emerges as a reminder that meaning and purpose can still exist in lives that remain humble. His sacrifices, though unacknowledged, shape a legacy far deeper than critics or sales figures can measure.