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    FantasyRomance Novel

    Serpent & Dove

    by Mahurin, Shelby
    “Serpent & Dove” by Shelby Mahurin is a YA fantasy novel set in a French-inspired world where witches are hunted by the Church. The story follows Louise “Lou” le Blanc, a witch who has renounced magic and hides in the city of Cesarine, and Reid Diggory, a devout witch hunter. After a chance encounter forces them into an arranged marriage, their opposing loyalties and beliefs create tension. As Lou’s secrets threaten to unravel, the pair must navigate betrayal, forbidden romance, and a brewing war between witches and the Church. The novel explores themes of identity, prejudice, and the clash between duty and desire, blending fantasy, romance, and adventure.

    Lou fol­lows Reid and Célie through a crowd, observ­ing their inti­mate inter­ac­tion with grow­ing irri­ta­tion. When she attempts to trail them through a hid­den door, the Arch­bish­op inter­cepts her, warn­ing against envy and blam­ing her for Reid’s unhap­pi­ness. He accus­es Lou of cor­rup­tion, claim­ing Célie is the ide­al woman Reid should have mar­ried. Lou defi­ant­ly coun­ters his hypocrisy, assert­ing his own moral fail­ings, before storm­ing off to con­tin­ue her pur­suit. The con­fronta­tion reveals the Archbishop’s dis­dain for Lou and his role in Reid’s forced mar­riage.

    Enter­ing a kitchen, Lou dis­cov­ers an open door lead­ing to a snow-cov­ered gar­den where Reid and Célie are deep in con­ver­sa­tion. She eaves­drops as Célie pleads with Reid to seek an annul­ment, insist­ing their love can still pre­vail. Reid resists, cit­ing his mar­i­tal vows, though his con­flict­ed emo­tions are evi­dent. Célie’s ven­omous remarks about Lou—calling her a thief and a whore—stir Lou’s anger, but Reid defends his wife, reveal­ing a shift in his feel­ings despite his loy­al­ty to Célie.

    The ten­sion esca­lates as Célie demands to know if Reid loves Lou. He hes­i­tates, admit­ting he could grow to care for her, which dev­as­tates Célie. She recalls his past dec­la­ra­tions of love for her and strug­gles to rec­on­cile his changed feel­ings. Reid’s refusal to hurt Lou, even as he acknowl­edges his lin­ger­ing attach­ment to Célie, under­scores his inter­nal strug­gle between duty and desire. Lou, hid­den and heart pound­ing, grap­ples with the rev­e­la­tion of his poten­tial affec­tion for her.

    The chap­ter ends with Lou’s emo­tion­al tur­moil as she wit­ness­es the raw con­fronta­tion between Reid and Célie. His unwill­ing­ness to betray Lou, despite Célie’s pleas, hints at his evolv­ing loy­al­ty. Lou’s ini­tial jeal­ousy gives way to a mix of hope and inse­cu­ri­ty, leav­ing her ques­tion­ing her place in Reid’s life. The scene sets the stage for fur­ther con­flict, as unspo­ken feel­ings and unre­solved ten­sions threat­en to unrav­el the frag­ile bonds between the three char­ac­ters.

    FAQs

    • 1. How does the Archbishop characterize Lou and her influence on Reid? What does this reveal about his perspective on their relationship?

      Answer:
      The Archbishop portrays Lou as a corrupting heathen with a hedonistic upbringing, blaming her for Reid’s unhappiness. He claims they “stole a future” from Reid and that Célie represents an ideal Reid could have been happy with (p. 283). This reveals his moralistic worldview, where Lou’s unconventional nature is sinful and Reid’s marriage to her is a punishment. His hypocrisy is evident when Lou counters that adultery is also a sin, yet he dismisses her perspective entirely, showing his bias against her.

      2. Analyze the significance of Reid’s conflicted feelings toward Lou and Célie. How does this tension drive the chapter’s emotional core?

      Answer:
      Reid’s struggle between duty (his vow to Lou) and lingering affection for Célie creates central tension. While he insists he won’t hurt Lou and could “maybe” grow to love her (p. 286), Célie’s accusation—”You said you loved me”—highlights his unresolved past. His physical withdrawal from Célie’s kiss (p. 285) contrasts with his emotional hesitation, underscoring his internal conflict. This duality humanizes Reid, making his loyalty to Lou—despite societal and personal pressures—a pivotal emotional arc.

      3. How does Lou’s eavesdropping on Reid and Célie’s conversation reflect her character development?

      Answer:
      Initially, Lou dismisses their love letters as amusing (p. 285), but witnessing their intimacy forces her to confront her own insecurities. Her visceral reaction (“felt sick”) and fixation on Reid’s words (“Do you love her?”) reveal deepening emotional investment. The chapter marks a shift from her defiant sarcasm (e.g., mocking the Archbishop) to vulnerability, particularly when she acknowledges the invasion of privacy (“This is wrong. Private,” p. 284). This moment complicates her tough exterior, showing growth toward self-awareness.

      4. Evaluate Célie’s argument for an annulment. How does it contrast with Reid’s sense of honor?

      Answer:
      Célie frames the annulment as justice, claiming Lou “doesn’t deserve” Reid and belongs in prison (p. 285). She appeals to authority figures (the Archbishop, the king) and Reid’s past love, prioritizing her own desires. Reid, however, prioritizes integrity: “I made a vow. I will honor it” (p. 285). His refusal—despite admitting he doesn’t love Lou yet—highlights his commitment to principle over personal happiness, a stark contrast to Célie’s emotionally driven pleas. This clash underscores the theme of duty versus desire.

      5. What symbolic role does the setting (the dead herb garden) play in this scene?

      Answer:
      The snow-covered garden, with its withered sage (symbolizing wisdom) and rosemary (traditionally tied to remembrance), mirrors the characters’ frozen emotional states. Reid and Célie’s relationship is “dead” yet preserved under snow, much like his lingering feelings. The icy breeze parallels Lou’s “glittering and cold” anger (p. 283), while the barren landscape reflects the barrenness of Célie’s hopes. The garden’s decay visually reinforces the chapter’s themes of lost futures and unresolved pasts.

    Quotes

    • 1. “‘I wouldn’t.’ He dropped my arm as if worried he’d catch something. ‘Envy is a mortal sin, child.’ / ‘So is adultery.’”

      This sharp exchange between Lou and the Archbishop reveals the tension and hypocrisy at play, with Lou defiantly calling out the Archbishop’s moralizing while hinting at deeper relationship conflicts.

      2. “‘We stole a future from him, you and I. Célie is everything a woman should be. Reid would have been happy.’ He looked back at me, and his mouth tightened. ‘Now he pays for both our sins.’”

      The Archbishop’s bitter lament exposes his role in manipulating Reid’s life and his belief that Lou is a corrupting force, framing the central conflict of the chapter around guilt and sacrifice.

      3. “‘I don’t know what the hell you’re talking about, but you need to look in the mirror. There’s a special circle in Hell for liars and hypocrites, Your Eminence. Perhaps I’ll see you there.’”

      Lou’s fiery retort to the Archbishop showcases her defiance and moral clarity, rejecting his accusations and turning his judgment back on him with biting irony.

      4. “‘The Archbishop is the one who suggested it.’”

      Reid’s revelation that the Archbishop orchestrated his marriage to Lou adds a layer of political and personal manipulation to the story, explaining much of the tension between the characters.

      5. “‘No.’ He exhaled heavily, looking down. ‘But I think—I think maybe I could—’”

      Reid’s hesitant admission about his growing feelings for Lou, despite his loyalty to Célie, marks a pivotal emotional turning point in the chapter and the broader relationship dynamics.

    Quotes

    1. “‘I wouldn’t.’ He dropped my arm as if worried he’d catch something. ‘Envy is a mortal sin, child.’ / ‘So is adultery.’”

    This sharp exchange between Lou and the Archbishop reveals the tension and hypocrisy at play, with Lou defiantly calling out the Archbishop’s moralizing while hinting at deeper relationship conflicts.

    2. “‘We stole a future from him, you and I. Célie is everything a woman should be. Reid would have been happy.’ He looked back at me, and his mouth tightened. ‘Now he pays for both our sins.’”

    The Archbishop’s bitter lament exposes his role in manipulating Reid’s life and his belief that Lou is a corrupting force, framing the central conflict of the chapter around guilt and sacrifice.

    3. “‘I don’t know what the hell you’re talking about, but you need to look in the mirror. There’s a special circle in Hell for liars and hypocrites, Your Eminence. Perhaps I’ll see you there.’”

    Lou’s fiery retort to the Archbishop showcases her defiance and moral clarity, rejecting his accusations and turning his judgment back on him with biting irony.

    4. “‘The Archbishop is the one who suggested it.’”

    Reid’s revelation that the Archbishop orchestrated his marriage to Lou adds a layer of political and personal manipulation to the story, explaining much of the tension between the characters.

    5. “‘No.’ He exhaled heavily, looking down. ‘But I think—I think maybe I could—’”

    Reid’s hesitant admission about his growing feelings for Lou, despite his loyalty to Célie, marks a pivotal emotional turning point in the chapter and the broader relationship dynamics.

    FAQs

    1. How does the Archbishop characterize Lou and her influence on Reid? What does this reveal about his perspective on their relationship?

    Answer:
    The Archbishop portrays Lou as a corrupting heathen with a hedonistic upbringing, blaming her for Reid’s unhappiness. He claims they “stole a future” from Reid and that Célie represents an ideal Reid could have been happy with (p. 283). This reveals his moralistic worldview, where Lou’s unconventional nature is sinful and Reid’s marriage to her is a punishment. His hypocrisy is evident when Lou counters that adultery is also a sin, yet he dismisses her perspective entirely, showing his bias against her.

    2. Analyze the significance of Reid’s conflicted feelings toward Lou and Célie. How does this tension drive the chapter’s emotional core?

    Answer:
    Reid’s struggle between duty (his vow to Lou) and lingering affection for Célie creates central tension. While he insists he won’t hurt Lou and could “maybe” grow to love her (p. 286), Célie’s accusation—”You said you loved me”—highlights his unresolved past. His physical withdrawal from Célie’s kiss (p. 285) contrasts with his emotional hesitation, underscoring his internal conflict. This duality humanizes Reid, making his loyalty to Lou—despite societal and personal pressures—a pivotal emotional arc.

    3. How does Lou’s eavesdropping on Reid and Célie’s conversation reflect her character development?

    Answer:
    Initially, Lou dismisses their love letters as amusing (p. 285), but witnessing their intimacy forces her to confront her own insecurities. Her visceral reaction (“felt sick”) and fixation on Reid’s words (“Do you love her?”) reveal deepening emotional investment. The chapter marks a shift from her defiant sarcasm (e.g., mocking the Archbishop) to vulnerability, particularly when she acknowledges the invasion of privacy (“This is wrong. Private,” p. 284). This moment complicates her tough exterior, showing growth toward self-awareness.

    4. Evaluate Célie’s argument for an annulment. How does it contrast with Reid’s sense of honor?

    Answer:
    Célie frames the annulment as justice, claiming Lou “doesn’t deserve” Reid and belongs in prison (p. 285). She appeals to authority figures (the Archbishop, the king) and Reid’s past love, prioritizing her own desires. Reid, however, prioritizes integrity: “I made a vow. I will honor it” (p. 285). His refusal—despite admitting he doesn’t love Lou yet—highlights his commitment to principle over personal happiness, a stark contrast to Célie’s emotionally driven pleas. This clash underscores the theme of duty versus desire.

    5. What symbolic role does the setting (the dead herb garden) play in this scene?

    Answer:
    The snow-covered garden, with its withered sage (symbolizing wisdom) and rosemary (traditionally tied to remembrance), mirrors the characters’ frozen emotional states. Reid and Célie’s relationship is “dead” yet preserved under snow, much like his lingering feelings. The icy breeze parallels Lou’s “glittering and cold” anger (p. 283), while the barren landscape reflects the barrenness of Célie’s hopes. The garden’s decay visually reinforces the chapter’s themes of lost futures and unresolved pasts.

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