In Chapter 23, the atmosphere at the Cornwall hotel drastically shifts following the cancellation of the wedding. The absence of the bride and groom leads to a muted ambiance, with guests feeling uncomfortable enjoying the spa amenities. Pauline, now a more subdued version of herself, diligently handles inquiries regarding refunds and allergies with a heavy heart. Phoebe finds herself in line with Nat and Suz, who are conversing quietly about the wedding’s abrupt end, recalling their suspicions about Lila’s feelings towards her fiancé.

As Phoebe engages in their chatter, she learns that Nat and Suz are departing that evening, although she wishes to prolong her stay at the hotel. When she inquires about availability, Pauline firmly states that there are no rooms left for the night due to another wedding. Stunned by Pauline’s decisive tone, Phoebe feels a mixture of pride and frustration, ultimately settling for one last night before checkout at eleven.

On the balcony, Phoebe contemplates Gary’s whereabouts. Her mind wanders, considering he might prefer solitude after everything, unlike her own desire to escape into her bed after Matt’s departure. As she observes staff members dismantle remnants of the wedding celebrations, she imagines the melancholy of a white ribbon spiraling into the darkness below. Trying to connect with Gary, she knocks on his door, but no answer comes. Marla appears, unaware of Gary’s plans and suggesting he may have left.

Later, in her own room, Phoebe feels a deep nostalgia for her surroundings—she loves the luxurious space, wishing she could carry its essence with her. Pondering how to mark her impending departure, she revisits her wedding speech, blending literary analysis with personal thoughts about Victorian marriages. An email from Geoffrey offers her a potential job, bringing a childhood thrill to her. Torn between informing Gary and drafting different texts, she ultimately chooses to focus on her writing, delving into “Jane Eyre” and analyzing the moments leading to Jane’s failed wedding. Energized, Phoebe writes through the night, reveling in the freedom of creation as she contemplates her narrative choices.